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Write-a-Thon: Chapter Three out, come in Chapter Four... [Jul. 5th, 2009|01:53 pm]
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My first missed deadline was Friday. I hang my head in shame. However, the good news is that my desperate whining produced some extra encouragement and a bump in my pledges to the Write-a-Thon.

Chapter Three is now out the door - as ever, please let me know if you have time to read this, or any earlier chapters. Each chapter read earns $5 for Clarion West, and Chapter Three earns a triple-shot venti $15.

Once again I've had to push a section of this chapter over into the next chapter, for reasons of length and weight. It looks like I'm going to wind up with more than ten chapters, unless I can start cutting the text harder than I'm managing at the moment.

Chapter Four is due on Tuesday 7th July. This is now the chapter in which Shelley storms the Majestic Hotel, is implanted with Underground technology, and has to make a decison about where her loyalties really lie.

Tally: $41
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Write-a-Thon: The Third Chapter [Jul. 1st, 2009|12:54 pm]

Hi all.

I should have made this post yesterday. I'm not sure what happened to yesterday.

Chapter Three of Moss & Feathers falls due on Friday, which is July 3rd for those people who love actual dates.

Unfortunately, due to family commitments on Friday, I really need to have it done for tomorrow. I say 'unfortunately' because I've only tinkered around the edges so far, it's the biggest chapter of the book anyway, plus I shunted the action-esque scene from the end of Chapter 2 into it because it really felt like Ch. 2 was getting unwieldy and a break was needed.

And I don't want to do it. For the first time in a few weeks, my book-energy is at zero. My back hurts, my hands hurt, and the characters have abruptly stopped talking to me. It's like I've made some terrible faux-pas, something worse than farting in a lift, but they're not telling me what the problem is. In the last ten days I've been through employment despair, relationship rows and my dad being hospitalised with a collapsed lung, and not had the slightest problem picking the book up. Why does this happen?!

Ngnh.

Tally a measly $14. Help me out, here! For this chapter I will triple all donations.
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Write-a-Thon: Chapter Two is dust-free. [Jun. 29th, 2009|07:52 pm]

I can report that Chapter Two (The Scrawl, 12,800 words) is sorted, nailed, done and dusted.

Special thanks go to my friend Pamela Budge, who's the only person so far to call in a read of Chapter One. If any of you want to sample Chapter Two, just let me know. Lie convincingly (which as ficition writers most of you should be adept at) and you won't even have to read it to earn $5 for Clarion West!

Here's a taster:

On the ledge above Barton Underway, where three narrow passages meet the stairs down from the square, she pauses for a moment and looks up. She has heard the hum of the engine, just a little closer than it should be. A jutting section of cliff shades this spot from the lighthouse beams, and the sun has gone, so when the airship slides into view the only light comes from its three blue-tinted spots, which pin the target down, dazzled. I chuckle.

- You’re cruel, Mal.

- How can I be cruel if I’m not human, Harry?

Tally: $13
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Write-a-Thon: Chapter the Second [Jun. 26th, 2009|12:25 pm]
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Chapter Two is entitled 'The Scrawl'. This is the chapter in which Shelley is drawn into the activities of Underground salon Alien Rockstars, meets a chap, takes the purple pill and gets into a battle. Lots of firsts for her.

It's due for delivery on Monday 29th June.

Mither me to get it done on time and I'll donate a buck to Clarion West, mither me if I'm already late and the figure goes up, read it (no critique necessary so it's Scout's Honour) and I'll donate $5.

Tally: $11
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Write-a-Thon: Chapter One, Gone [Jun. 25th, 2009|08:29 pm]
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Phew! Chapter 1, which is the one where my protag, Shelley, starts to fall over her two goody shoes and get mixed up in things she didn't oughter, is done, gone, O-U-T out.

I cut it from 15,000 to 13,000 words, approx (my target was 10,000, but feh), removed three scenes, wrote two new ones, and substantially rewrote about half the rest. I'm absolutely nuked.

Tally: $6. Not looking so great huh. It should bump a bit when I get reads for Chapter 1, but I'm really hoping to get more naggers for Chapter 2.

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Write-a-Thon: Chapter the First [Jun. 21st, 2009|06:08 pm]
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As I detailed in this post, I am sponsoring people to nag me to get my novel edited during the Write-a-Thon. Nothing I love more than punishment.  Please click the link to see how you can help.

Chapter One  is due for circulation on Thursday 25th June.

Current tally is $1.

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And they're off! Write-a-Thon is GO! [Jun. 21st, 2009|01:19 pm]

As you know, Bob, today is the first day of the Clarion West Write-a-Thon.

My goal is to complete edits on my novel and circulate one chapter every four days.

I know few people have cash to spare these days (and let's face it, almost all my friends on LJ are ex-CW or close to the workshop in some way, and seeking sponsors of your own), so rather than ask for sponsorship, I will donate $1 per person per chapter for people to nag me to get it done on time (increasing if I fail), and $5 if you read it. Critiques are optional.

Support an amazing insitution, without spending a penny!

If you are looking for somewhere to throw money, though, I won't argue. You can donate here.

Here's how it works: I will make posts on LJ and Facebook for each chapter in advance of its due-date. You can then poke, prod, nag, yell or threaten me until I release the chapter. If I go over the due date, I will add an extra $1 per person for every day I'm late - as long as you keep on at me. Nagging can be done any way you like; text, email, phone, PM, MSN, FB, hand-delivered letters scrawled in green ink... And if you read it I'll add another $5 per chapter - just make sure I've got your email address. I'll publish a running tally.

I'm flat broke, flatter-than-Flat Stanley broke, so this should be a great incentive. Here's to Clarion West, long may she reign.
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What's the Story? [Apr. 15th, 2009|12:04 pm]

From The Persistent Illusionist

At this year's GDC, Jeff Kaplan of Blizzard talked about quest design, outlining nine problems with quests in WoW. Lum picked it up at
Broken Toys (which is where I saw it first, though it's all over everywhere now), and now Timothy Burke has posted an interesting response at Terra Nova, which has prompted me to post my own thoughts on the subject. more
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Eastercon Extravaganza [Apr. 14th, 2009|11:07 am]
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I'm back from Eastercon, and glad to report that any reservations about going to a con alone and rooming with a stranger were unfounded. I had a great time. I hung out with many lovely people, and may even have picked up some useful stuff from the programming.

I took notes at some of the panels and presentations, which I'll summarise and post here if there's anything worth sharing in them. But to borrow a meme from Melinda, here's the basic round up of Things I Learned at Eastercon:
  • Stay at the con hotel if the other hotels are not within walking distance. Those buses are baaad news.
  • That said, leave the con hotel as often as possible and try to get some daylight.
  • Always sit near the door, especially in the panels that may touch on politicial issues.
  • Talk to people you don't know, especially if you've never heard of them.
Things I would really like fellow attendees to have learned:
  • Do not speak if you haven't been called on.
  • A panel is not a platform for you to yell at innocent bystanders about the evils of the State or your personal preference for Bejeweled over World of Warcraft, whilst preventing more interesting people from discussing the topic at hand.
  • This remains true even if you are on the panel.
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(no subject) [Mar. 30th, 2009|06:16 am]
Testing auto-posting via email with ping.fm. GO!
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How Do I Do That...? [Mar. 29th, 2009|07:53 pm]
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I note that several of you LJ smartypantses cross-post between LJ and your external blog. According to the FAQ, the only way to do this is to manually copy/paste the entry into an LJ post.

Is it really true? I've reactivated Persistent Illusionist and I'd really like a quick way to generate something here with a snippet and a link.
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Posterous | Re: Having a look at Posterous [Mar. 29th, 2009|03:55 pm]
Testering posterous auto-postering via email...


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Subject: Posterous | Re: Having a look at Posterous

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Wikiwiki - Documenting Game Design [Mar. 27th, 2009|12:52 pm]
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(from The Persistent Illusionist)

 
I decided that the only way we were going to progress with the MMO project was to start inputting all our research, discussions, decisions and design documentation into a Wiki. I tried a few out and settled on Netcipia. It has the same problems as PBWiki - the WYSIWYG isn't, and the overall feel is cluttered and not customisable enough. But it's free, and it'll do for the time being. There are tools available for working on MMO design (e.g. Video Game Design Pro 2006 ), but I'm not ready to invest in a commercial package at the moment.

I made a list of articles I wanted to write for the blog, but feeding the Wiki has taken up an immense amount of time. And that's the thing with a collaborative project; you have to write everything down. Topics on the Wiki cover our initial vision for the game, background reading on sandboxes, multiplayer game design, player psychology, combat systems, skills trees, and elements of world building, such as geography, climate, flora, fauna, transport, technology and politics. We also needed to think about marketing and finance, and there's a huge section on development tools, as we're working our way through, evaluating the available options.

It's a more than daunting task. We've been talking about it for six months, and the work is only just beginning.
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When They Were Right and You Were Wrong [Mar. 16th, 2009|01:20 pm]
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In his review of Black Static 9, Lawrence Conquest backs up all those critics of Haunt-Type Experience who didn't like the quotes from Parapsychology. Which was, um... almost everyone. Like my CW class, he just doesn't think they add anything to the story.

So do I regret ignoring the advice of a roomful of smart people and keeping the quotes in? Not really. If I'd taken them out I'd always have wondered if I was doing the right thing, because my guts just kept on telling me they had to stay. I still feel like they had to stay.

However, Lawrence describes the quotes as 'pseudo-scientific rationale'. I hate hate hate stories that crowbar weak science into a narrative; it always bounces you right out and makes you go wtf? I'm thinking about midichlorians, and the science bit in the middle of The Time Travellers Wife. The key thing for me in HT-E was that the science was the story. I obviously failed to get that across; I failed to make the SF and horror elements of this story gel.

Is this a personal weakness, or a problem inherent in cross-genre writing? Or both?
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This old. I wonder what the stats are now? [Feb. 26th, 2009|01:18 pm]
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Publication - Haunt-Type Experience [Feb. 24th, 2009|10:04 am]
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What prompts this post are feelings of guilt at a failure to use LJ; the ass-kickingly awesome[info]mthielbar has given me a shout-out regarding my first semi-pro-flavoured publication. I only posted the news on FB. You can line up to slap me, I can take it. So: hurrah, Haunt-Type Experience is in the current issue of Black Static (issue 9). It's reviewed here.
 

Some background (maybe don't clicky if you're thinking of reading it): )

 



I haven't seen it and I won't see it until 5th March, when I get back to Bristol from Cote d'Ivoire. I'm dying to see what artwork I've got.

 

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Never moving fast enough [Nov. 15th, 2008|03:19 pm]
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I'm on a train, travelling from the family home in London to a party in York. It makes a delicious change from the Bristol - London commute and the journeys between those two cities and the middle of the country - Birmingham, Crewe and Manchester - that I'd grown so inredibly weary of while I was working for the bank.

This train is the express from London to Edinburgh, capital to capital, and it's old and a bit tatty, but lusciously comfortable and understated. It also has free WiFi. Best of all, there's hardly anyone on it, so I get to sprawl about and have an entire table to myself. Bliss.

What I should be doing, rather than updating LJ (though my LJ is sorely neglected and will have to have rust treatment soon if I don't start caring for it better) is working on my 2008 NaNoWriMo project. It's going slowly, but when I manage to get into it, it's a lot of fun. It's a post-apocalyptic journey narrative, centred on a young girl who's trying to find ways to survive in an unfriendly world. There's no great message, and I'm allowing myself to use every cliche ever invented. This is NaNo. That's what NaNo's all about. The terrific thing is that it's allowing me to explore the world we've been building for my Great (ly Unrealistic) MMORPG project. I do find it harder to write without an emotional core to the work though. It's hard for me to write from my head instead of my guts. Good practice though.

I just wish I could go faster. It seems that the more I write the slower I do it.

I thought that travelling less in the real world would allow me to travel further in my head. I'd be less tired, less stressed, there'd be room for my imagination to leap forth in all directions... instead I feel itchy, and that I need to be moving, moving, moving. I wish I had my own train, like the Queen. I could trundle up and down Britain, looking at fields go past the window, rolling along above all the stones and mud.

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Delivery Girl Completes Mission [Sep. 5th, 2008|11:08 pm]
FYI CW 2008 - CD has his T.
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Skiving [Aug. 13th, 2008|09:45 pm]
Today I had planned to go into downtown St Paul to look at Art Deco buildings, and from there into downtown Minneapolis, meander around Minneapolis some and then get the light rail up to Carrie's place. 

I gave myself the day off. I slept late, according to the local clocks, though the time is very much an external feature, rather than something I've internalised in any way. I've changed time zones twice this week and will do so again on Friday, so I'm not bothering to try and synch up. I'm burning out on the travelling & sightseeing & socialising. It's not a reflection on the places or people I'm here to see - it's all great. In some ways I never want it to stop. But I needed a day to curl into myself and just process.

Seattle was a rush of memory; exquisitely painful and gorgeous, that weakened my knees and left me gasping.  It was as though the intervening months had been swept away, and I was as raw as when I left Seattle last year. The healing process, just as Leslie suggested it would be, was seeing my Clarion classmates, allowing me to recast the past year in the context of other people's experiences, and to understand that Clarion is over, but it ain't over.

My trip to the Bay Area was both fun and comforting, and I think it would have been stimulating if I was in any state to be stimulated - maybe that will come later. There is definitely more bubbling under in terms of the Frida Kahlo exhibition and the rolling fog than I can call to my conscious mind as yet.

WorldCon was a blast. More on that later.
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Back in Seattle [Aug. 3rd, 2008|04:31 am]
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Only a short one cause I'm still jetlagged as hell.

It is very, very peculiar being back in Seattle one year on.  At first I felt calm, and that was strange, because I was high as a kite for everything I remember of CW '07. Then the memories started to crowd in, and became increasingly coloured with emotion.

I could see my classmate's faces in my mind and hear their voices far more clearly than I've been able to do for a while. I kept expecting them to come round the corners in the U-district any moment, or be sitting waiting for me in the bookstore, or Coffee and Comics, or one of the restaurants. Even though the sorority house they're in is different, even as I realised what was missing were the dreadful smells and spooky atmosphere of our sorority, I could smell those smells and feel that spooky atmosphere. It was trippy, and it's a mercy it was in a different house, 'cause if it had been ours I think my head would have popped off.

Anyway I am certainly looking forward to seeing more of *my* Clarion, having sat taping sheets into boxes while the bright young things of '08 said their goodbyes. It feels like no time, and thousands of years since we were doing that.

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